Zontelfonzo's game Reviews on Newgrounds

[Don't Get Blammed!]

Ummmm, well, I'll start with the good. This concept works well in this environment. blaming is something that your advice should all be familiar with so point for that. There are however quite a few areas that could use improvement such as the lack of a replay button. Also after the game has been lost keeping the space bar down cause shot instances to still be create at 0,0. And a final note is that a shooter of this short gains 50% more excitement if the background is doing anything. 100% more is that background contributes to the game and gives the scene a sense of action and motion.

holyhelltv responds:

thats alot of work.

[Eraser Racer]

Cool little Game. The walls of text are a little much to get through though, Credits and other information should really have it's own screen so that's there less between the player and your game. For that reason the instructions are good to put right at the beginning of the game, as scenery objects like signs. A good amount of scenery object might give the perception that the eraser has much more destructive power.

Stripetail-Studio responds:

Yeah, I had pondered adding little drawn houses and such, and might go back and add this.

[Pac-man Jump 4: jungle]

Well it wasn't that bad. I would however like a way to kill, knock out, those enemies, but I did enjoy the concept of the theme. With some tweaks to the game play, and some plot flow this would be a decent game.

Cheetoh responds:

Exactly . I'm still learning, and I really want to make more complex ones.

[The Genious Begins!]

meh

I think you could have changed the title to something that tells that is really an art gallary.

maskedone2 responds:

ok, fair point.
by the way its art gallery. not gallary